A Jon Bryden as the Biko family’s lawyer, Kentridge, holds up the shackles as evidence of torture in Langara‘s Studio 58 production of An Inquest on Stephen Biko, on stage until Oct. 14. —David Jenkenson photo The idea was there but writers weren't This is one film I wanted so much to like, to be able to praise. A film produced, directed and written by women, about women. It could have been a major break through in those areas where few women film artists have been admitted before. All that makes it doubly painful to report that although it is made with obvious devotion and reverence for the problems of young women in today’s society — the basis of the film — it fails to achieve its goals, despite a few telling and moving scenes. And those are all too infrequent in a rambling, jerkily untold story which cannot make up its mind — or help you to make up yours — as to whether it is serious, comic or merely, as I was forced to con- clude, ambiguous. The story revolves around, the experiences of a young woman photographer just out of college and trying to make it as a professional in the competitive world of New York. But it is really more a series of vignettes than a developed narrative. The fault must be placed upon the writers, since the direction, acting and much of _ the photography is, in tha main, that of gifted young people and oustanding pros; they all poured their hearts into this one, which is more than merely praying for success. Whether through .lack of skill, experience or a real study of the writing technigues required for a feature length film, they delivered a choppy, uneven narrative with little foreshadowing to catch our interest, no developing conflicts (except internal, which cannot be photographed) and a lack of narrative continuity which is required to bring a film to a climax and conclusion. We leave the characters after 87 minutes just about where we met them. About 60 minutes into the film, the leading actress says in anguished introspection, “I don’t know what’s going on anymore.” In that one sentence she summed up the feelings tis reviewer had been experiencifig for at least the previous 45 mili Partially com casting. Weill formers who W@ PACIFIC TRIBUM ating is the _ a selected per- GIRL FRIENDS. Produced and directed by Claudia Weill. Screenplay by Vicki Polon based on a story by Poilon and Weill. At the Denman Place Theatre, Vancouver from Oct. 6. meet-on-the-street people and not sexpots or theatrical ‘‘per- sonalities’’. Centuries ago, Shakespeare gave this undying rule to all playwrights and all who would go to appreciate their works. Remember, he said, “the play’s the thing.” It has been repeated hundreds of times in an many ways, and once again only last month by that serious veteran actor Jack Albertson. He said, ‘‘Let’s face it: an actor is only asgood as the material he is provided ... the words are the most important thing and without them, an actor has no place at all. When you have a good script it’s a joy ... a bad script, it’s a chore.’ Lester Cole ee ee Drama of Biko’s inquest — seen on Studio 58 stage © Stephen Biko, a Black South African student leader and a founding member of the South African Student Organization died September 7, 1977 of brain damage caused by blows to his head in- flicted by South Africa’s security police. The transcript of the thirteen-day inquest that followed his death was condensed and transformed into a two-hour script by Jon Blair and Norman Fenton and for the next two weeks drama students at Langara will be presenting their dramatic re- enactment at the College’s Studio 58. Director Anthony Holland, in introducing the play, wrote, ‘‘The important thing in this production is the understanding of the script.” It is this understanding which the students use to enhance their presentations subtly without becoming overly ‘‘theatrical.’”’ An Inquest on Stephen Biko is a stark production in which the revelations which emerge from the proceedings provide the dramatic force for both the actors and the audience. The inquest, presided over by a judge called Prins (Ear] Klein) is intended to determine whether Biko’s death was caused by “‘act or omission” on the part of the South African police after they arrested him for not having /his passbook when he left King Williams town. But as the evidence is presented, it becomes clear that his arrest was because of his distribution of “inflammatory pamphlets” and engagement in political activity, a fact which Goosen (Gerry Nairn), head of the South African Security Police, infers when in the witness box. The lawyer for the Biko family, Kentridge (Jon Bryden), questions a vast array of witnesses: police officers, general practitioners, physicians and neurologists who all fit the same pattern — im- peccably dressed, reserved and implacable, like the marionettes that they are, worked by the ruthless hand of Goosen. As Kentridge calls and recalls each of them to the witness stand, their, statements come to compose what he calls in his final deposition, ‘‘a tissue of lies”, ugly in their thoroughness. The truth which does begin to TV personality Asner joins in rights appeal Television personality Edward Asner, familiar to TV audiences as television producer and newspaper editor Lou Grant was among the more than 400 leading Americans who signed a letter last month to U.S. president Carter calling on him to ‘‘speak out for the human rights of the 10’’ and asking that he meet with ‘‘a representative delegation from among our numbers ... to discuss this most urgent matter with you.”’ The letter, which was also signed by 85 members of Congress as well as several state legislators and U.S. mayors, pointed out that, at the time they were sentenced, the 10 faced a total of 282 years’ im- prisonment for arson and con- spiracy, charges that were widely acknowledged to be trumped up. “Since that time, every prosecution witness against the Wilmington 10 has recanted the trial testimony, telling both the state courts and a federal grand jury that their testimony had been induced by threats and bribery by state and federal officials,” the letter noted. It added that further defence witness had come forward since the trial and that 2,600 trial errors had been documented by the defence. Despite that, an appeal has been sitting in federal court without action for 29 months while, at the same time the U.S. Justice Department has held up an ex- pected investigation for 14 months. The more than 400 signers told Carter, ‘‘To this day we have heard nothing from your office in support of the human rights of Reverend Chavis and his co-defendants. It is well and good to speak of the human rights of those ‘n other lands but attention must be paid at least equally to those who suffer deprivation of the same rights in our own country. We now appeal to you to bring the moral weight of your office to bear to secure justice in this most important case.” The letter called on Carter to speak out in support of the human rights of the Wilmington 10 and to “urge a speedy conclusion’’ to the justice department investigation. NE emerge, little by little, is the result of the admirable tenacity and skill of Kentridge, ably played by Bryden, a graduate of the drama program at Langara. As the real cause of Biko’s murder i§ revealed, the audience can follow, more or less chronologically, ‘a man’s progress to his death’’ and con- tinually reflect on the enormity of the injustice. At the same time, the drama reflects on the conflict of those who position has always been one of upholding the status quo. Not only is Kentridge outraged at the crimes committed by those such as the police who are supposed to maintain the law, but also at the injustices perpetuated by the legal institution in which he himself is a participant — the court. The judgment which the magistrate brings down at the conclusion of the inquest degrades the institution which Kentridge firmly believes in. And another man of conscience must face the fact of his profession’s complicity with the corrupt and inhuman system of aparthied. Doctor Gordon’s liberal heart is shocked when he comes to understand that the doctors who take the witness stand did not uphold the Hippocratic Oath and were, in fact, accomplices if Biko’s murder because they did not treat the symptoms which they knew only too well could result in death. On the whole, the performances were credible although at times, ! had the sense that some actors fell they were there merely to “read” rather than to give a dramatic presentation. Director Holland was at pains to point out in his program, ‘‘although some of the script may sound unblieveable, can assure there is no fictiol here.”’ It was necessary to carry that thought throughout the duration of each and every pel’ former’s presentation. A real mal died at the. hands of the South African security police. Real it justices were, and are, being perpetuated at every level every day of the year in a country which is dominated by the system of apartheid. : The students of Langara must bé congratulated in their serious effort to make vivid and real to thé people of Vancouver what it is like to live — and to die — in South Africa if you oppose the existing order. ‘ Janice Harris: The top photo, of three- year-olds in the GDR town of Torgau wrapped in their towels after their baths, won second prize for Waltraud Raphael in the Beautiful Photo com- petition of the World Press Exhibition ‘in Amsterdam in 1977. But incredibly enough, the same photo appeared on the front page of the West German magazine “Martyrs’ Voice”, No. 6, 1978, with the following caption: “Children in prison clothes. A photo smuggled out of a Soviet concentration camp. The children were born in the camp and grow up there till their parents are released.” The ‘smuggled’ picture | that won a | world prize Ss